*(THIS IS NOT TRUE!!!)
All My Life,
I waited for you!
I waited for you,
To say I love you...
Now here I am
Waiting to die,
And all you can say,
Is, "Okay"?
Ever since High School
We had this thing,
Where we'd talk,
But not go crazy.
I used to blabber,
And you'd ignore me,
But I only did it
To show you, I love you!
So what if you are me?
Dying in this bed?
What if you are me,
Having your heart wripped out?
Good-bye,
My love,
Because you never loved me,
So I should say is
I hate you,
Now as I slip away
And lose my final tears,
I look at you and say,
I wish you the pain I have.
A contest entry
- Death Bed Confessions by queenie.
1800 points, ended February 13, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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it would be great to be able to say what we feel to someone as we lay upon our death beds,especially someone we gave our all to.this is a great one.
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Ouch
Say the words hun say the words lol. Vividly told, I can almost feel the venom building in your words. It might have been nice to take this a little further and se where it went
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aww. thats sad but sweet. lol reminds me of u and rach. hhahaha jay kay jay kay. nice one matt. gl in the contesttt
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