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Err Ummm Turtle Quits

The tick tock of that silver clock
beats at my heart- my mind,
my worries.
That single moment getting close,
fearing the worst.
Scared of what will happen next.
Lack of sleep is eating at me,
pain is gnawing at my strength.
How much longer will this take..
Why don't promises seem to stick?
Once it's said they turn around and back track.
Well more fear just builds up.
What am I to do?










GRAWR.
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  • Sorrows Redemption
    March 16, 2007

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    Giving up won't work...the problem will just come back to haunt you later. I love you and i hate seeign you sad...it makes me very sad
    Things will always get better


  • WishMeAway--x
    January 23, 2007

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    Don't Quit, don't ever give up. Thinga will get better in time, all you have to do is work for it.

    Why don't promises seem to stick.
    That is a really great line though.

    Love
    ♥


  • RoNiN KaNaYe
    January 22, 2007
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    NOOO!! DONT QUIT LOL


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 22, 2007
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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    quiting, you quit and i will do something that i haven't figured yet but this is a sad poem that makes you think a little but seriously you quit, i will....that is about all i got i will think of something keep it flowing


  • u took my user name
    January 22, 2007

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    do you want me to wear my sad face? it's in my pocket, i can easily just take it out and wear it. B/c i really wanna wear it :-(

    TURTLE! come on... i know you better than that.
    Just remember that i love you munches.
    And i'm sorry i haven't been online much. Is that this professors don't give a rat's ass about anything but the stupid class. one of them gave me 5 books to read. And Plato is not that easy of a guy to understand

    Don't worry, zemër. I'm sure all will be fine. I know, life can be a bummer sometimes, but that's what makes us stronger.

    I love you,
    Be well


  • pattyann4500
    January 22, 2007

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    Well, you just can't quit! You are Turtle, and Turtle DOES NOT QUIT!!! Now, you get out there and fight, young lady! Umm, did I do okay on the support thing? Would I make a good coach, or would I just have everyone laughing at me?

    I know you're not well right now, Sweetie, but things will get better. You'll be back out on that playing field before you know it! Love, Gramma

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