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Love Affair

Secret doors now lie open,
Begging to let out,
The demon scowls at my last breaths,
Screaming for release,
I plead let the pain cease,
I began to show the truth,
Its come to light now,
All we lived was a lie,
Sinning in the night,
I said I loved you,
But, the truth only I knew,
I whispered failures in your ear,
Trying to keep you here,
For your love is ecstasy,
But, Now I have to say:
"I never truly loved you,
All the walks, laughs, and taunts,
Were for my enjoyment only"
I lied my life,
Sinned it away,
Now to hell I surely walk,
The death sentence comes,
I gripping your hand,
Some how you manage to love,
Knowing that you just spent the span of your life,
Under assumption of a ill forsaken love affair.

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  • queenie
    February 13, 2007

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    i like the way this reads.it like quoting lines from a play.sort of like a silioguy.that's sure spelled wrong but my point is that it is something that will read well out loud.