Here it comes again
A wave of relief.
As my bottom lip disappears behind my teeth
a trickle of blood
spills down to the sink.
I did it again. It just feels so grand-
The cold razor to wrist
the twist of my hand
the slice on my skin
feelings flooding within.
I won't make it stop
my skin is so hot
It makes me feel happy again
"Why can't you be smart!" she yells at me
I'm trying, I'm trying!
Just let me breathe!
I'm crying again.
My hand's slippery with blood
I cant find my razor
My eyes are a flood
Someone do me a favor
Please make me smart
Give my life a flavor
or rip out my heart.....
Author notes
I DO NOT CUT MY WRISTS!!!!!! I DO NOT!!!! i just figured i'd write from someone else's perspective..hope ya like it....
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great write
for not being a cutter you seem to know a lot about the feelings cutters go through...great write...that hit home, seeings as i used to cut myself...keep up the great work...
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This was a deep write and from your write...I would have guessed immediately you were a cutter, but so pleased to learn you are not. Your certainly succeeded in stepping into someones shoes and taking us on a dark journey, Excellent work! Not my favorite topic to read, usually would skip on by, but for some reason kept reading...you pulled me in. Strong write, keep up the good work (hopefully on lighter subjects ha!)
~Tia
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Im confused . . . you cant even look at your wrists without squiling but you can write gore like this.
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For writing from someone else's perspective this is very insightful. Dark....but insightful. Definitely got a reaction. Not sure exactly what it was yet.....but I definitely felt something. You're a good writer. One of the greatest gifts a person can have is the ability to understand the woes of others. 10 Brownie Points to you.
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