{Cocaine} kisses;
Your Breath Whispering Like The Morning {Stars}
Floating in this {midnight} sky,
[[cleartoseebutsosohardtoseethrough]]
These {Scars} Are [{ASHES}] Designed To Hold My {Bony} Form In Place
Just Like The {Eyeliner} And Endless {Narcotics}
[{acid} glimmers like glitter gloss, the sparkle of fishnet {rainbows} and stumbling {intoxiacated} {fairies}]
They Lost Their ((plastic)) {Halos} [.LONG.AGO.]
&&. The {stardust} that falls as {confetti} lies on the ground, {stitches} to the broken earth across {graffiti} {bruises}
Sweetheart;;
there's no hope.
[But I Love You All The Same]
Author notes
Eugh. I dunno. Something that came out the other night.. I looked at your wordbank, and needed some time for it to sink in. Hope you like. I don't usually do these types of things..
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&&. The {stardust} that falls as {confetti} lies on the ground, {stitches} to the broken earth across {graffiti} {bruises}
Sweetheart;;
there's no hope.
[But I Love You All The Same]
this was gorgeous, sweetie. =]
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i absolutely loved this babe.
every word...was...breathtaking.
your descriptions were mesmerizing.
this is...
hands down one of the best i have read.
love it.
love you.
♥
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Sweets, you're too amazing.
Noise&&Kisses
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I love the descriptions.
Esp
"[[cleartoseebutsosohardtoseethrough]]"
&& " stitches to the broken earth across graffiti bruises"
"Sweetheart;;
there's no hope.
[But I Love You All The Same]"
Beautiful
♥♥[ms.oblivion]
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I love yarr sweets.
[[You'reFarTooNice]]
Noise&&Kisses
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