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My Monstrous Creature

Into eyes that burn
Out of the deep
Those men they squirm
Through agony they weep

My monstrous creature
It feeds on lives
I am no preacher
I murdered your wives

If you dare
To be a sinner
Please take care
Or you’ll be its dinner

A heart of ice
Its hatred born
Talons they slice
It’s for you I mourn

I take it you met
My bat from hell
Such a cute pet
Isn’t it swell?

The blue moon rising
Your people stand strong
My creature is dying
It won’t last long

Its days are spent
The sun has set
Into death it went
I shall not forget

My monstrous creature

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  • xxRaquelxx
    January 22, 2007

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    arghh
    darkness
    and randomage
    and the non happiness
    another classic 4rm yoo darlin
    love and the like
    x x x