You've served us well
dear house of mine
Remembering back to the
time that you were born
Our village friends joined
the arduous task
In the birthing pangs of you
With the final nail in place
We all celebrated the day
You were finally complete
You've served us well,
dear house of mine
Protected us from scorching heat
Plus kept us dry and
safe from hail
But, in life there does come storms
Some leave us unscathed,
some in disrepair
One more curtain to be hung
pictures to be put in place
our house was now our home
You've served us well
dear house of mine
Laughter once resounded
from within your walls
Moments of sorrows lived there, too
Family celebrations,
times of sweet devotions,
our haven from the world
Meals around the family table
The days events shared by all
How wonderful to have a home
Yes, dear house of mine
You served us well
Years of memories
will be buried in your heap
One last picture to put in place
in our precious book,
next to the first one
we ever took
You served us well
Author notes
Please don't mention my name in your comments since this is an anonymous contest-thank you for reading and I will respond in IM's-thank you again!!
A contest entry
- Get The Picture by Samplette.
600 points, ended January 25, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow..just the old house of mine gave your piece strength and honor. A great write. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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What a thrill!!!! Thank you soooooo much!!!!! You're the best! You in that blue bathtub, you sexy thang!!!
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This reminds me of the poem I entered for this contest! I liked the form of the poem and it was sweet and full of warm thoughts. I hope you do well!
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I like this too.
It does remind me of the homes that were destroyed by Hurricane Katrina as well as the tusami. I think you evoked strong emotions here.
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Lots of memories in that house and feeling to this. Had a sadness and yet appreciation to this. Look at that picture wow intresting how they lived in that very different from homes here in United states.


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Beautiful.
Just wonderful, very much like a song lyric- exceptional verse and a lot of deep emotion and sentimentality. Great work.



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SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is superb and you captured that picture with such clarity. Your loving soul brought forth a write that fit the picture perfectly. I had looked at this contest and all I could think of was Gilligan's Island. LOL
You looked at it with your heart. I have to remember to do that all the time. Not after watching the boob tube. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with all of us and you have my very best wishes in the contest. It sounds golden to me. A standing ovation definitely a must to go along with my applause here. Love and God bless, Joyce


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GREAT WORK!
This is a great work....I think you did bring the picture to life indeed.
I wish you the best of luck.
LIZ

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You have really brought the picture to life and made it a home full of loving memories to cherish! This is a wonderful piece my friend and a delight to read! Best wishes in the contest!
frogz~
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