You Held My Hand As We Walked Through The Tired Parks and Flickering Streets
You Pulled Me Close && Whispered
"Dollface, you're my favourite. And I LoveLoveLove You For//ever."
[[IDidn'tBelieveYou]]
You Kissed My Cheek As We Giggled On Your Sofa While The Broken Leather Crackled
You Told Me This Would Never End && Murmured
"Dollface, things might never be the same. But I'll NEVER Change."
[[IDidn'tBelieveYou]]
You Hugged My Waist My Skinny Hips And Said You'd Buy My Food
You Said There Were No Catches && Promised
"Dollface, all I want is for you to E.A.T. And I'll Do Anything."
[[IDidn'tBelieveYou]]
You Brushed My Hair Out Of My Face Sighing Your Pretty Pretty Sigh
You Stayed Sad And Cold To Me && Said
"Dollface, this was never quite right. I [//.KNOW] You Think The Same."
[[IDidn'tBelieveYou]]
But.I.Still.Tried.SO.HARD.
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this made me feel unaturally sad... i can kind of relate to it, and yet its still really hard to listen to...beautifully presented though, nicely done! ♥
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""Dollface, things might never be the same. But I'll NEVER Change.""
--and it makes so much sense.
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Glad. And ThankYarr.
Noise&&Kisses
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first of all. the title was really clever. & cute. so kudos for that.
second. "Dollface, you're my favourite. And I LoveLoveLove You For//ever." sounds EXACTLY like something I would say. infact, i say that exact phrase all the time, so this scared me a little, lol.
third. this was very angsty. i loved it. ferserious, man. you rock. keep it up, babybaby. ♥ -
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Thanks sweets =] hey, maybe my psychic powers are better than I thought!
Noise&&Kisses
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so i n c r e d i b l y sweet&bittersweet&absolutely.relatable.
I love it. (&you of course)
♥♥[ms.oblivion]
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I love you more and more and more.
Noise&&Kisses
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this is beautiful.
i loved every second of it.
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Thankyarr sweets. Your comments mean so much =]
Noise&&Kisses
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