Your words are written on my heart
Hurtful words of rejection
You did not love me from the start
Your words are written on my heart
Never sincere, you played a part
Feigning true love and affection
Your words are written on my heart
Hurtful words of rejection.
In a list
A contest entry
- graffiti hearts by Heart Sutra.
875 points, ended January 27, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Point and originality by HellRaiser21.
330 points, ended May 9, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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It is amazing how hurtful words can be and how long they last...just amazing. Well, thank you for sharing your poem with the contest.
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It's short but not too short, I enjoyed it, it was a riveting, heartfelt read.
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