Beautiful
Looking in your general direction
Nervous hands intertwine
And it's only the beginning.
Enticing
In the gentle glow of the moonlight
Hands snaking round my back
pulling me in closer.
Bewitching
Another head fits perfectly on my shoulder
Sudden and unexpected
But welcomed.
Amazing
The warmth of your arms around me
As you drift into sleep with a smile
Remind me how to love.
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Author notes
About someone I love..
A contest entry
- Allpoetry One Year Anniversary Contest by Tali28.
900 points, ended June 17, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write. I like the style and the flow of this piece. Good luck in the contest. Take care.
Tali
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Thanks
Thanks for your entry. I will be back with my thoughts and comments after the contest ends.
Tali
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Fab read..
This is beautiful. Thankyou for sharing. It flowed wonderfully. The love the bit 'Enticing
In the gentle glow of the moonlight
Hands snaking round my back
pulling me in closer' Great stuff.
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