Nothing but us two
Just me and you
The hardness of your body pressed up against mine
Your sensual lips cover mine
In a erotic kiss
Teasing and tauting me
Till I moan at this senual assualt of my body
Listening to the bustling streets of Paris
The warm rays of the sun heating my already aroused body
The wind blowing the thin clothes that shouldn't be
It's just me and you
And no one else
Your hands roam
Kissing the nape of my neck
Leaving a wet trail of kisses upon my skin
How I only wish to breath you
Is it possible to love someone that much?
Molding together into one
It's just you and me
Just the two of us
Author notes
just let me know if there is anything that you would change about this poem and I hope that this entry is what you are looking for.
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one mis-spell in line 7 other than that this is the kind of every couple dreams of----nice work!!
the Satyr
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Wonderful!
It's sensual and absolutely, wonderfully heartwarming knowing that love like that exists. Thank you for sharing and I hope you do well in the contest!!!
~.~Yvonne~.~
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trixie08
hey gurl don't change anything about this because i know this is what u've wanted to do for the longest time and i'm so sorry that i haven't been there for u like i should have been i've been through Hell these past few weeks. i'm truely sorry and i hope to talk to u soon!!!
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Wonderfully presented and sensualy touching.Well done and thankyou for sharing.
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oh dear .... xp im quite sad now *sniffle*
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wow
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Ooh, la la!
Very nice. You'd make me forget the sights and sounds and smells of Paris. and that wouldn't be a bad thing at all.
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Thankyou for your sensually beautiful submittal, and there's no need to change one word, it's perfect as is, Bella
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