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My Love

Its hard to explain my love for you today.
But if I had to, this is what i'd say.

I've loved everyday we've spent together.
I thought it would last forever, a feeling I could never thing to have.
Wont you stay so I can love you another day.

I've got to hold you close, an kiss your cute nose.
I've got to wrap a blanket around you when we sleep.
An poke your side to see if you were awake.

Your the most beautiful thing, to ever escape heaven's gates.
I never thought my would could be so great.
Please tell me your love isn't fake.

For, i've never felt so horrible for the mistake I made.
Even though it now seems you wanna push an go.
But I wanna hold on an never let go.

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  • j-ay rose
    February 20, 2007
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    Most people make promises to love each other but how many of those people actually go through with their promises? The notion is pretty, but seems too insincere. Perhaps you really do love the person this is about but don’t really know how to go about saying it.


  • JuggaletteGoddess420
    February 1, 2007
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    Awww

    This one is so cut but is it true and who did you write it for me or Laura?