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Melodrama will ensue
With blood vomit and Cajun blackened hearts
All spicy and hot with cayenne peppers and blood rain
Dreamy dangling emo-hair always in our eyes
And I will chuckle
A slow, warbling chuckle at your futile gesture
Your emaciated and weak stab at attention
You are no better than the media
Printing the suffering and sickness of the world for entertainment
Yes, you are entertainment
Hence the chuckle
It’s funny, right?

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  • Nam
    March 28, 2007
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    This piece would have been better if the last two lines were removed.

    -Nam

  • maheo
    January 22, 2007

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    this is interesting....or disturbing depending upon which side you are on. I think that you have a point to make.