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It carries its home pickaback.
does the tortoise.
He's not soft and cuddly
like you Jack,
or so our teacher taught us.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 22, 2007

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    A very creative flow organized within your write. Quite captivating indeed! Thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.