Electro kinetic strands of the soul,
return to creation of heavenly glow.
Becoming one with the Lord at peace,
infinity rest with one that you seek.
Now as an intricate part of the heavens,
no more to stress Earthly bound direction.
Absorbed into creation in heavens love,
finding all answers you've ever thought of.
Rest peacefully safe in the arms of God,
return is a choice he grants with a nod.
The journey of life has strings attached,
peace is dependent on if good or if bad.
Free will was always yours from the start,
how you wield it is what sets us apart.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picturesque by Samplette.
450 points, ended February 4, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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An amazing write here. I think you did a great job all around. Rhyme, rhythme, beat and flow. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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BEAUTIFULLY INSPIRATIONAL!!!!
One truly has to have faith in God and put into practice what they have learned, and so few do.


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Beautiful.
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Really nice writing you are a gifted writer.
Best wishes in the contest. Sherry~


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Ooo this is so very deep. I love the background and graphic you have it..you know free will can be so tricky sometimes

The best of luck to you in the contest.

Kari -
ANother beautiful piece penned from a lovely pic. Your words do it justice. There are so many wonderful entries in this contest ... I am sure that the host will have a difficult time in judging it! Best wishes to you and be blessed,
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A most beautifully penned piece, Bella
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Free will is a great gift, I think.


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