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Heavens Ascent

Electro kinetic strands of the soul,
return to creation of heavenly glow.
Becoming one with the Lord at peace,
infinity rest with one that you seek.

Now as an intricate part of the heavens,
no more to stress Earthly bound direction.
Absorbed into creation in heavens love,
finding all answers you've ever thought of.

Rest peacefully safe in the arms of God,
return is a choice he grants with a nod.
The journey of life has strings attached,
peace is dependent on if good or if bad.

Free will was always yours from the start,
how you wield it is what sets us apart.

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  • Samplette gold member
    February 4, 2007

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    An amazing write here. I think you did a great job all around. Rhyme, rhythme, beat and flow. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 26, 2007

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    BEAUTIFULLY INSPIRATIONAL!!!!

    One truly has to have faith in God and put into practice what they have learned, and so few do.


  • Tirrell
    January 22, 2007
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    Beautiful.


  • Sherry gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    Really nice writing you are a gifted writer.
    Best wishes in the contest. Sherry~


  • Kari gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    Ooo this is so very deep. I love the background and graphic you have it..you know free will can be so tricky sometimes
    The best of luck to you in the contest.

    Kari


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    ANother beautiful piece penned from a lovely pic. Your words do it justice. There are so many wonderful entries in this contest ... I am sure that the host will have a difficult time in judging it! Best wishes to you and be blessed,
    Frogz~


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    January 22, 2007
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    A most beautifully penned piece, Bella


  • Heart Sutra
    January 22, 2007
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    Free will is a great gift, I think.

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