Rise up from the waters,
with wings as beautiful as a unicorns purity.
So innocent, so unique,
devious in its wonders
and the magic it possesses.
Drawing you in-
closer
and closer.
Dance beauty dance,
with your long golden hair of elegance,
and the grace that you float upon,
with every move your body makes.
Closer
and closer.
Your arms opened, invitingly
positioned high,
reaching out for someone
to refresh them of their sins.
And through them, you see yourself
when you look deep into the reflections.
Fly little angel
Fly high above the sea of dolphins,
and the land of the unicorns.
Fly high with beauty and grace
and with the innocence that you all possess.
Together, you baptize all that come across you,
and gift them with rebirth.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration by Frogzter.
525 points, ended January 23, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
As good as ever Jen. This piece made me think of love: pure and simple. But not.
Great write, I loved it.
Sag -
Nice!
Very inspiring! You definitely got a gift for this. Keep it up & you'll be famous.
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You have captured the pic well! A wonderful addition to the contest! THanks so much and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
A most beautiful write, Bella
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I like how I feel carried away and swaddled in care and finally released to live anew.....nicely done
~Starr~ -
great
This poem really captures the beauty and the essence in the picture used for the contest. I like how the poem looks deeper into the picture and sees more than what meets the eye. Great write!
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I think it is a bit sexual then maybe not it has really got me thinking and Iliked your writing style
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