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Beginners Luck

At the park to run and play discover nature on the way
Adventures everywhere to explore in constant curiousity
Food sounds good with orange juice too
I'm home now Mom from an adventurous day
Can't imagine what I have to say, Guess What

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What boys are made of!

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  • paullallady silver member
    February 4, 2007

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    Ahh the life of a child, caught so splendidly here
    in this poem. This is not just for small boys,
    though I am sure that is what you can relate to, being male, lol. In that same park, some young girl
    was rescued by a prince, or saved a life as a doctor, or many more dreams that can only be fulfilled in the
    imagination of a child.
    I loved this one a lot.


  • Lady-Pegasus
    January 23, 2007

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    how sweet

    Having raised two boys I can cherish this like a memory of my own. They were such opposite boys that it evokes completely differing such memories too, hehe Nice write !


  • love-laugh-live
    January 22, 2007

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    Oh this is cute, and soOo true. Believe me i have brothers!
    The title threw me too, but the poem itself is really good! Hope you win!


  • January 22, 2007

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    Aw. The title threw me off, but in some way I can't explain I think I see how it fits.
    The write is wonderful! To be that young.. it was wonderful too. I love this.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 22, 2007

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    This is just so sweet and very creative. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.


  • Goodolenad
    January 22, 2007
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    oh how sweet


  • Huny Bun
    January 22, 2007

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    Very good!

    Childhood, a place we all wish we could return to. Where the world was viewed through the big eyes of innocence. Brings back fond memories.


  • honey bear
    January 22, 2007

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    fun write

    good luck in the contest with this rather fresh fun write (cute picture too) keep up the good work and thank you for sharing


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    January 22, 2007
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    Aw this is too cute, I can just hear him say it too Bella


  • Mirodelphiki
    January 21, 2007
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    Cute!

    I love the fact that its short but still sweet! Its so cute and really embodies a youthfull spirt. The image that accompanies it is perfect. This poem really reminds me of my childhood. And fits me perfect because i was always the ones to say guess what?

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