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the sunshine

The Sunshine peers through the empty glass.
It brightens up the days, and adds peace into our lives.
There's always sunshine on the other side.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 21, 2007

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    nice write

    Nice write, Simple and saying a lot. Yes the sunshine does add peace to our lives (what I'm sure you really meant to say instead of 'peave') Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian