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Heartbreak (Not Healing)

I feel I'm hanging on
By barely a thread
And I can't seem to get
Thoughts of suicide out of my head

Almost took that razor out
To add another scar
Though it isn't right
Happiness seems so far

Tears stain my cheeks
And blood stains my wrists
There's rain on the windows
And bruises on my fists

A broken heart
Lies on the floor
And a frigid sign;
"Do Not Enter" on my door

The stereo blasting
With every song that I hear
Just like those whispers
And soft breath in my ear

I miss that embrace
The one that was home
But it's not coming back
And I'm all alone.

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  • Time focus on Me
    January 29, 2007

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    Outstanding JOb

    full of powerful emotions and outstanding heartfelt poem with a powerful message. loved the way you expressed your self and I feel ya with the broken heart cause I am there now with a broken heart. And NOpe I agree your not alone there is someone who is always there for you. once again great poem. ttyl bubbles


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 22, 2007

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    And I'm all alone.

    you are never alone as long as you have family and friends on here and out there, you are never alone, we are always there for you, keep it flowing