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In Neon Light Love

Walking down the boulevard
It's only half past nine
My First drink of courage
It's only a matter of time
'Till those honky tonk blues set in

Setting in the honky tonk
It's a quarter 'till twelve
A women just caught my eye
I'm in love again

I'm in a honky tonk heaven
In neon light love
I'm glad that I'm a cowboy
And that's what she's looking for
I'm in a honky tonk heaven
In neon light love

Bartender pour another
It's going on one
Another cowboy's trying to horn in
He does know I'm in love
I hear them call last call
I'd better seal the deal

I'm in a honky tonk heaven
In neon light love
I'm glad that I'm a cowboy
And that's what she's looking for
I'm in a honky tonk heaven
In neon light love

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Just a fun ditty, Wanted to write a good ole honky tonk song,

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  • JeremyWilliams
    November 15, 2007
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    hey pretty good keep um commin wriet some old style country


  • panegyric ink
    February 6, 2007
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    Liquid courage.

    Where I go to occassionaly kareoke, that's what they call it. Definitely a song that you have here!!!! These thoughts make for great lyrics, and I love honky-tonk, grew up with it in Leavenworth, KS. Overall? THIS NEEDS TO BE A SONG RECORDING & THAT'S JUST ALL THERE IS TO IT!!!!!


  • gullionmar
    February 2, 2007
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    NOT TO BAD AT ALL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 29, 2007
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    I can picture you in your honky tonk heaven..and just loving it..The music,just the kind you like, and a lady just your type..Strumming your guitar at times, but also dancing the night away...Happy to see you enjoy music so much....Its' good for the soul...Good write!

  • June-bug
    January 21, 2007

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    It's got the stuff, for agreat Honky tonk song!

    Well Cowboy, you did an excellent job on this here ole honky tonk song. Can see a little two steppin, with some Westren swing, and maybe a little shuffle. Great Job. Love it.


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    January 21, 2007
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    Go Charlie!
    i can just picture you sitting there with a guitar and chanting those lyrics. keep honking.

    Noticed a few little typo's friend maybe you'll like to fix.
    4th -line it's
    5th,-'till
    13th,- she's
    25- that's she's

    Like i said just little errors. good luck.
    Slán dolores.


  • debilynn gold member
    January 21, 2007

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    this is awesome! your use of imagery is great. sounds like fun! and i love cowboys! thank you for sharing this. keep on writing. God bless you


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 21, 2007

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    Hey Charlie, Well Howdy there partner. Welcome back. I thought this was so cute. I know you always do win the ladies hearts. All you have to do is give them that beautiful winning smile. . Thank you for sharing. I ain't been honky tonking in quite a spell. This was so much fun to read. You take care. Love ya, Glad you are back safe and sound cowboy from your R+R Blessings to you my dear friend. Sandy

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