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You changed a dead life

Since I was young I was a cutter.
I just loved the feel of pain, it ran through my veins.
But because of you that changed.

I can honestly say, that the day I met you...my life would change.
I knew it would be better this way, thats why I stayed.
You changed me, to who I should be, an no more cutting.

Your the proudest thing in my eyes.
The brightest star in my sky.
Even though I still seem depressed tonight.

Everythings alright, aslong as you stay by my side.
You make me proud to live my life.
Wont you be mine, starting forever tonight?

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  • kennybaby05
    January 23, 2007
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    Thank you for entering my contest. Nice job on the poem

    • Necrocide
      January 24, 2007
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      i was glad to of enterd the poem, everything i write means alot to me. an thank you for hosting the contest.


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    January 21, 2007
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    Such love

    When a person can affect a change is someone that just proves that love conquers all. This is a lovely poem full of love and beauty. Thanks for sharing

    As always I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy