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Confused About You!

This is making me
go fucking crazy
This is why I hate
hanging out with you

Yet I love it so much too
Its tearing me up
and breaking me down
I'm falling apart

Its all because of you
I can't help the way
that I feel about you
I wish I could

It hurts to see you with her
It hurt so fucking much
you have no idea
how low I felt then

But when she left
everything was fine again
until you started ignoring me
then the low came back

You make me happy one minute
and then depressed the second
I hate that you have
that power over me

The thing is that you don't
even know what kind of
powers you have over me
that you can make me fall for you

You make me want to
kiss you one minute
then to slap you
across the face the next

I'm so afraid to tell you
how I really feel
I don't want to ruin
the friendship that we have

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I still feel like this god damn it.......

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  • Kurtis and Trista
    February 26, 2007

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    WOW, damn girl you know how to let you feelings out. I really like this one. I LOVE your poetry...
    Trista

  • Heavenly Star
    February 5, 2007

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    THis is an emotional poem filled with so much sadness and anger towards someone, you go girl get your feelings out a well written piece you have here


  • HasIssues1
    January 31, 2007
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    awwwww i kno that feeling. ugh sucks ass


  • XbasketballXchickX
    January 23, 2007
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    Omg lissy this is really good I know how you feel kind of And just know you got me forever and ever ok lol I will ttyl keep the great writing up k byebye love ya
    amie ~rose~


  • King Nothing
    January 22, 2007
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    *muah*

    All things get better my love, you'll see!

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