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Teenaged suicide

A noose hangs swinging
Knives lay bloody
Depression is killing
As morals fall muddy
*Kleine probleme, sonderbar*

Teenaged suicide is high
THe highest it has been
I do not wish to die
Unless I can be see
*Das ist wonderbar*

Men like my father do
Not aid us in our fight
Our life is slaughter too
And God was never right
*Würfel in der Eifersucht*

If we aren't addicted
To smoking, booze or weed
We are being evicted
For the money that we need
*Meine familie ist sehnsucht*

My cat is sleeping, though
Soon I'll fly from the nest
And we will go
To see lifes best

Spraying alcohol I am drunk
Intoxicated by feelings
I'm a renegade of funk
Bathing in poetic meanings

This poem is old school
I'm bringing back the past
*Mittwoch was ist das?*

My life will be rules
By murder and clubs
I gurantee I'm consumed
By rage and hard drugs
*Gemacht*

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  • WickdlyUndrstanding
    January 25, 2007
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    Hey Hol,
    I haven't talk to you in a while..
    I don't understand the German things, but I'm sure they add spice to your poem!
    in the 2nd stanza, 4th line, the 'see' should most likely be 'seen' Im guessing?
    Nice, i really like the topic!
    ~WU
    PS- I told some of my friends about my 'issue' thing