And all the while trashy glamour whores
danced under street lights with
crushed fairy tales written on their palms.
Hiding beneath make-up masks
and never ending [plastic] romance.
[Darling, wouldn't it be grand if
You Were Ken & I Was Barbie?]
Over exposure and alcohol
mixed and swirled
and drowned
"little miss break it"
in controversy and make believe
originality.
She was Bound to [im]perfection
and sexxx with strangers.
Beautiful flowers
died in her eyes and
eating disorders
stormed reality
[but mostly just the glitter queens]
[I Mean, Drag Queens?]
Author notes
I Actually used the description of what you wanted as a word bank. Hope you don't mind Darling.
<3Aj
In a list
A contest entry
- Glitter Queens & Nicoteen by E t e r n i t y.
650 points, ended March 5, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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sounds like a biography of me...
mmmh lucious..
your words are like sex lyrics in my song..
-alexsis
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you make me want to go dance in the street... in a fairie gown.
with you.
and your sexy amazing intelligent mind.
"And all the while trashy glamour whores
danced under street lights with
crushed fairy tales written on their palms.
Hiding beneath make-up masks
and never ending [plastic] romance.
[Darling, wouldn't it be grand if
You Were Ken & I Was Barbie?]"
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You used the words brilliantly
You crafted it carefully and beauitfully
It seemed effortless
Like butterflys flying....
You got the crushed fairytales
And the broken innocence
Good luck in the contest
My entry is a little bit crappy now...
I'm amazzzzzed (and I don't add in the extra zzzzs because the key sticks)
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honey.
this piece...
blew.me.away.period.
wow.
i can't even comment at the moment...because i'm left speechless.
{there are no words to describe this...'amazing' is so overused&&dead}
but this piece was out-fucking-standing.
♥
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"She was Bound to [im]perfection
and sexxx with strangers.
Beautiful flowers
died in her eyes and
eating disorders
stormed reality
[but mostly just the glitter queens]"
fucking amazing hunnie.
I ♥ you.
Oh && you'd be uber proud of me. I wrote 2 days in a row
Hahah.
<333
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you amaze me.
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haha this made me smile.
good ending. <3 -
impressive
not only is it lovley, it caught my attention from the very begining and i read it all the way through with a smile on my face. i love love love the words you used! great write, good luck on the contest loviee
<3
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