You are the one who knows my mind
And helps me through the day
You are the one when I have a problem
Helps me see another way
You are the on who is there for me
To cheer me on
You are there for me
dusk or dawn
You are the one
Who has been with me from the start
And you will always be the one
In my mind, and in my heart
A contest entry
- Lift my spirits please. by Poetic Aphrodite.
450 points, ended January 22, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - E-Heart by x Gemini x.
600 points, ended February 10, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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First, let me thank you for entering my contest.
Second:
The flow and imagery was very well done. Creative perspective and conveyance. Easily related to. Short, Sweet, and Simple.
Not quite sure what it has to do with E-HEART.
Very good. -
Thankyou for your most beautiful submittal, and if you are who I think you are then you also know I will always be here for you, Bella
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