Wishing you the world
Is still nowhere near enough
To show you how I love you
And I just can’t get enough
I want to whisper to you
And tell you of my love
Hold your heartbeat near me
A gift from up above
If I could give you anything
To celebrate this day
I would give you everything
A whole day in which we play
Bringing you breakfast in the morn
As we watch the rising of the dawn
Spending the day upon the beach
Using a blanket as our seat
An evening dancing under the stars
The sand under our feet
I’m helplessly bewitched by you
I just hope you feel the same way too
So this invite I give to you
To be shared with just us two
I’m so glad I met you
And we found our own way through
Author notes
option 3
A contest entry
- Celebration for Erotik Rose by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
525 points, ended January 24, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Help me make my Valentine mine! by DenyMyLove.
525 points, ended February 1, 2007, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Her I love her by Shadows of wolves.
800 points, ended March 5, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My Hearts Sings as the Wedding Bell Rings by melodramatic emo.
600 points, ended February 28, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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it makes me cry
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hi i thought this was very good and the flow was very nice also i could feel the love put into this thanks for entering
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oh so sweet
what an oh so sweet poem! Thanx so much for taking the time to enter this and all the best to you!peace & blessings
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Very sweet and loving, and flows beautifully. Wonderful lines you have penned. You have expressed your love so tenderly and effectively. Well done. A very enjoyable read.
Jeannie
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Makes me recall my own secluded days with my love. I like love poems... it reminds us throught the grind of everyday that we should cherish the moments we have.
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Congrats on the gold
!!!!! Very touching and loving devotion ,your happiness and love is almost tangible in this beautiful write
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"I want to whisper to you
And tell you of my love
Hold your heartbeat near me
A gift from up above"
This opiece is so sweet and this verse really spoke to me. You have amazing talent, I hope you and your Love get more than just one amazing day togheter.
Good luck in the contests!
SLAM
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Except all of those contests have ended
Silly me. Congratulations on the Gold, you truly earned it.
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a sweet and romantic write, well deserving of the trophy i see it won
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww such a sweet and loving poem! Good luck in contest, i really enjoyed reading this! keep up the great writting
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aww this was so beautiful and sweet and wow I just loved it I love the first stanza very well written it flowed and it was so heart warming thanks good luck
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Wopw this is a very romantic read, one I enjoyed alot,
Good luck in the contest.
Shadows -
Beautifully and lovingly written; your heart speaks loud and true
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This is an awesome write!!!! So sweet and loving!!!! Thanks for sharing and entering it!!!! Good Luck!!!!
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Love the emotion you do write a hell of a love poem and thats quite the wish list of things you want sounds like a wonderful time again Bravo
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whoa, this was amazing, it was better then sex, lol, you did agreat job on this keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Oh this sounds so wonderful, Ilove to be pampered and ktulu knows that and does this very well (at times). Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
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nice
this is sweet...
Blessed Be
Green Mother Rose -
Dang it girlfriend!didu grab thast frommy pile? gol- nice pleasant words and its sweet.. now I just have to write somethingdifferentenough thaat they dont think its the samepiece,,, geeez yoou makin me work hard....
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This is both very beautiful and romantic, and sounds like the perfect way to celebrate the day. You have captured so much of just how I feel for her and also how I enjoy pampering her. Thank you for this entry and good luck to you.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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