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Big Dipper

gaze behind the pane
see the dark night sky.
Find the moon, now
let the light catch your eye.
I know,
I only know
what it does to you,
how it moves your soul.

Big Dipper, take my side.
Starlight, be my guide.
Through everything,
through everything,
even time...

gaze behind the faces
see inside yourself.
Find the shadow, now
let them of their shelf.
I know,
only I know
what they do to you
how they take your soul.

Big Dipper, take my side.
Starlight, be my guide.
Through everything,
through everything,
even time...

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  • FifthDove
    January 22, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This poem easily sounds like it could become a song. It’s beautiful and the imagery is fantastic Nicely done! I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to Allpoetry. I know being new to a site you may have a few questions or concerns, so please feel free to ask any greeter or use the "Help" tab at the top of your page Dove