While memories can assume so many things
I'd like to think that what we have is this
That sadness disappeared with tiny wings
And gladness turned into a lovely kiss.
And memories getting lost where I am now,
Should linger as the present not the past
Knowing what we want, then please allow,
This closeness could get better, let it last.
Author notes
Knowing what we want, then please allow,
This closeness could get better, let it last.
A contest entry
- Lift my spirits please. by Poetic Aphrodite.
450 points, ended January 22, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can feel the warmth of love and the smiles of a happy
life one will wish to hold..beautifully penned. Congratulations
on the silver trophy.
Take care.
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beautiful
this is wonderful...wow it's been too long since I had time to read some of your work..I have forgotten how fantastic it is...I shall be reading more! a pleasure as always to read your words...I have missed it!!
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This is such a beautiful piece great write that is so well written.well done on winning the silver well deserved
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Thankyou for your most beautiful submittal, and all I can say is if this were to be true then I would be the happiest woman alive, to have the chance with the one who steals my breath away, Bella
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Lovely my friend, the words simply drip off the lips in meter with my tears. Your talent for penning emotion is nothing short of brilliant. Amera
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