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To Bella

Beautiful Bella Love of my life
How I long for you to be my wife
I see you as you loveingly walk
Standing in a distance I dare not talk

You bring the Stars so close to me
The Moon is sending a Moonbeam free
Take my hand as I help you on
We'll soar the Skyway and Starburst pond

If only I could say how much I love you
You are my one and only love so true
Some day I will get the courage to spill my heart
Reavealing that I never want us to part

Until the day I can have you as my own
Until the day our love has deeply grown
Until the day I hear you say yes
Until then my darling I will not rest

For tis you I love so very deeply
For it's you that set my heart so free
For it's you that fills my every desire
You said yes,thank you my wife, you quenched my fire
                  -Katie Lazette-01-21-07

Author notes

This poem was written from what I think is a man's point of view. This is what he may see and think of when he see his Bella. Any way Bella I hope it lifts your spirits. I know I would love to have a man say things like this to me and I'm old.

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  • Poetic Aphrodite
    January 21, 2007

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    Katie this is just beautiful, and I would love a man to say these very things to me, thankyou for your lovely submittal, Bella


  • nell
    January 21, 2007

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    I think every woman would like this to be said to her regardless of age. this is a beautiful poem and it flows really well. good luck in the contest

    shanelle