Can I mark reasons, for love in a day?
A challenge where praise is given to Creator.
Soul ignites to eyes’ embrace of you before skin,
Tang is the scent into stage of longing.
Some reason my love be blindly sway
Arguing, I ask them to look upon stature
Noticing the perfection, termed to be Sin
Enchanting flame, giving lust a calling.
Astonishingly my love is free, freedom of Right;
Smiles, tears, of all my life I put up to use.
Take it all, use it more, ‘til the death of my light
Rest at ease, for this not be fault, but mine choose;
After passing months, if you to take next to site:
You, and all, will witness love for lover no fool’s.
A contest entry
- Lift my spirits please. by Poetic Aphrodite.
450 points, ended January 22, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Enchanting and inviting!
I loved this so...
You have an awesome way in your approach to life and to love...
You have a true gift...
~ James ~
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this is so beautiful, i love the ways that it flows....
Some reason my love be blindly sway
Arguing, I ask them to look upon stature
Noticing the perfection, termed to be Sin
Enchanting flame, giving lust a calling.
it gives off a warm feeling -
A very uplifting piece. Shows love's trueness in each stanza. I absolutely liked line two. Everything goes back to Him. Great job! Smiles, Terry
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Thankyou for your lovely submittal, Bella
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