To you my special Valentine,
upon this day for love.
Sent to me by Heaven's Angels,
that gaze down from above.
Such mystic emotions I feel,
when held in your embrace.
I long again to see the sun,
light your beautiful face.
As the sun rises in the morn,
I lay and gaze at you.
As gentle, sweet, loving kisses.
touch you like drops of dew.
Celebration of each other,
your hair my fingers muss.
This day for us to escape from,
all that life throws at us.
The stars now shine down upon us,
moons soft glow caresses.
Their light shows me all the magic,
that your soul possesses.
My heart soars aloft with these thoughts,
of you I dream to see.
Complete in my arms together,
fusion in harmony.
So from me to you I do say,
my heart to you I send.
Be my valentine, my girlfriend,
my lover ~ we transcend!
A contest entry
- Tell that certain somebody on Valentines day how much they mean to you by wings of an angel.
525 points, ended January 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The perfect poem by xandercheerios.
800 points, ended March 3, 2007, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on winning silver, this is an awesome poem. Flows effortlessly and is beautifully written. You write from the heart for all to see, excellent.
James.
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oh this is so touching
so emotional
love flows through your words
wonderful
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Congratulations on winning a silver with this in another contest. It flows pretty well and was easily understood.
Thanks for entering it in my contest too. -
After all that horribly difficult judging, you did well to get silver! VWD!
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Quick question, is muss really a word? Nothing negative from me if it isn't! Very nice form, rhymes and flow.... other than send-trancends... not really a perfect rhyme. Your use of punctuation fits my requirements, and though a simple ABCB rhyme scheme, it is still very much accepted
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thank you for entering with this very sweet and loving write, good luck with the person in question and in the contest
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a very beautiful poem, you clearly love that person very much thank you very much for your entry, and good luck
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Soooooooo Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dave, This is a beautiful poem you have written for your special lady in your life. The excellent verbiage gave it wonderful imagery and the rhythm and rhyme made it flow so soft and sweet. I'm sure that she loved this poem for her. You captured me with it from the beginning right down to the last word. Best wishes for both of you and in the contest. I will leave you with a standing ovation to go along with my applause. Kudos for you my friend. Love and God bless, Joyce 
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OOOOOOOHHH!!!!!!
SOOOOOOO!!!!! Romantic.she is a lucky girl to have someone who feels as you do.Wel done for expressing your love for her so well, Ros
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How sweet and beautiful! You are amasing and a God send at that. Your heart is so big and full of love it is overwhelming. A wonder and true romanic at that. What a beautiful write of words from your heart and soul.
You are the best!
Love
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Mystic-al xxx
hun if your Mystic al ladylove doesn't love you now she will deffinitely after reading this my dear friend!! it is awesome xxxxxxxxBest wishes forever always and good luck in the contest tho not much will be needed as it is awesome and trully from your heart and soul xxxxxx
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is the the valentines love or the special day that's send down from above by heavenly angels?
'gentle, sweet' & 'soars aloft' & 'complete in my arms' approaches cliche, watch out
V-day is hard to avoid cliches though
I like trancendance
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Beautifully penned. Rhyme and meter flow well. Touching words for a special someone on this very special day. You have done this justice. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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This is a lovely poem that you have penned here for your girlfriend, well done your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in my contest
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