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Him

The tears softly seep out of her eyes
As you wipe them away everything goes mushy
The world turns upside down
As you kiss her

You say she is beautiful
She looks at you upside down
It’s the only way things make since to her
As you kiss her

Her eyes glitter and gleam
As you hold her
Making her safe
As she kisses you

Short and sweet this poem is for us
Caring goes a long way
She misses you tons
As she thinks of you kissing her

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  • Diatribes
    May 11, 2007
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    Like a dream that makes me cry in my sleep, yet I dont want to wake from it.


  • loveisamixedtape
    January 22, 2007

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    i fricken love it! so simple and beautiful...lovely lovely write keep it up cuz i'm lookin forward to ur work!


  • The Guardian
    January 22, 2007
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    I LOVE IT


  • The Guardian
    January 21, 2007
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    Whos This For??? its awesome write...very heartfelt