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I'm no superman

caught by the river
snake-shaped veins
filtered by god's liver
no boundaries, no chains

don't try to influence a thought
emerge victorious by experience
stand up for your pride
commence before you begin to collide

im invulnerable nor do I suffer pain
hold up your mind and refrain
they try to shackle your wrists
its like being dismissed

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  • Karen Layne
    April 19, 2007

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    interesting....I'm not sure exactly what is happening here...the first stanza made me think of some of my friends when they had been drinking...but I'm not sure if that's the impression you want...