Long ago in the great city of Barcelona.
Lived a vampire named Desdemona.
She reeked havoc on many innocent souls.
Searching for the one, to make her whole.
Hundreds of lonely years, seem to be her fate.
Thousands kissed, but none were her true mate.
Then one night, she went on a feeding spree.
Biting and killing each victim with glee.
Breaking necks, chasing people in fright.
Not caring how many, killed that night.
Licking the blood of a women with a purr.
A tall dark figure, came down upon her.
Their eyes met, a connection was made.
At his side in a flash, he was unafraid.
He moved taking her with his hungry kiss.
Tasting the blood on her lips, with a hiss.
He had to have her, right here in the street.
Her scent was strong, for she was in heat.
Biting her neck, sign of his blood red desire.
Her nibbles here, there, set his soul on fire.
Ripping off her clothes, playing with her slit.
Pushing her on all fours, making her submit.
His long phallus was as hard as iron ore.
He drove into her, with a lion’s mighty roar.
In and out, pounding to a fast steady beat.
There was no escape, nor any retreat.
They fit together, like a hand to glove.
Passion peaked, with the kiss of the beloved.
Desdemona, search was finally to a end.
She now has her mate, and a life to spend.
This is what both longed and searched for.
Lonely, dull days and nights, no more.
A contest entry
- Make Me Believe (Invite Only) by DarkChildsKiss.
1750 points, ended February 19, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampires of Darkness creatures of the Night Reveal your Wings, Fly away with Me! by ennovy.
700 points, ended September 10, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
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ooh, this was awesome. you did a wonderful job writing this. and thanks for your comment on my poem, Step-Dad. the man, is an ass... the judge told him and her not to live together, now she's trying to move to waverly to live with him... after talking about how she wanted to get rid of him... I don't understand that. oh well. congrats on your gold trophy and the silver trophy. good work! keep it uP!
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wow! thank you for entering my contest..this a blazing tale of darkness......novy
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Thanks for entering!
To be honest, I love this write! It is truly amazing! Great Write! Thanks for entering and your entry is appreciated! -
Thank you for entering my contest. I'll give my true comment to this poem later.
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to taste the essence of one's life whether above at the neckline or below in satin bliss wow!!!
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AVERY GRAPHIC PIECE OF EROTICA..
A classical piece of erotica that comes with a touch of narrative ;in order to depict in graphical details what it means to find chemistry in a relationship between a man and a woman.BEAUTIFUL!!!
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Ummm what a senaul dark piece!!!
Vampires, sex, and the verse are just chocked full of beautiful vivid pictures. I wish thee luck in thee contest. Excellent job, so write ON!....novy Thy mother
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Thank you
Thank you for your kind review,
raingoddess
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Wickedly wonderful! Great write. One correction needed, fourth stanza, first line, "There eyes" s/b "Their eyes". Otherwise,reads well, very entertaining, good descriptive quality as well. Walt
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Thank you
Thanks for your wonderful review of my poem, and help with my misspelled word, thanks again.
raingoddess
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