No sleep tonight
Hurricane Charlie's on the way
No sleep tonight
Filled with fright, no way to take flight
With naught to do but kneel and pray
And hope to survive this tragic day
No sleep tonight
Author notes
My wife and I experiencd Charlie's furor.
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A contest entry
- Only The Good Die Young by Brugge is dood.
450 points, ended February 2, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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not what I expected from the title, but a good poem. thanks for entering =D
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I've never gone through a hurricane the size and travesty of Charlie, nor many others, but you expressed the anxiety and overwhelming fear pre-hurricane hit so well by this rondelet.
Best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo -
This, I really enjoyed reading.
One of those a reader can read over & over again!!!
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