who ever said that love was easy obviously never felt it before
because if they did they wounldn't have said it because of all the pain that they endured
it starts out sweet like a rose petal kiss
but as time moves on you lose that bliss
they say that love is blind
i'll tell you that's not true
falling in love is just about the shallowist thing we do
they say that love conquers all
but it doesn't conquer much
because deep inside you crave someone elses touch
they say they'll love you forever
or that without you they would die
don't even get me started because forever is a lye
so what do you do with all this being said?
do you still want to love or would you rather be dead?
listen my friends don't take this to heart
it may have ended up bad, but remember the start?
do you really want to take back it all?
or are you only upset about it's down fall?
Author notes
Option 3.
Rhyme. You can rhyme about anything; use any form, any style. As long as it rhymes, it can go in this option.
option 2
A contest entry
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Wow i like to hear the truth the real thing and im really feeling this poem because hey i woudlnt take back the memotires because that all i ahve left but good job and good luck in my contest
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What a different view of love! There is a lot of truth hidden between these lines you've inked.
"they say that love conquers all
but it doesn't conquer much
because deep inside you crave someone elses touch"
That really topped it off for me. Nice write and thank you for entering my contest. -
Personal
I can tell right away
that you've went through this
That's the only reason why you would write it
I like the way you put it
Quite blunt, and reminds me of my ap name
anywayz
Thank you for entering
Good Luck in the contest
NeveR ♥ -
I like the truth this poem puts right to you. This is true in many cases, I thought this was well written and a very emotional write. Message me if you want your score, make sure to include the name of your poem.
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Aye, Chica
I agree with outoflove925, 'AWESOME'. I think everyone ponders about this once in a while. I really never thought you wrote poetry this good, hell i didnt even know you wrote poems! But again and again you amaze me! This poem dazzled me! I think of the same things all the time.
Keep writing this was really extrodinary! It had a lot of blissful emotion in the beginning. Then it turned into raw, questioning pain. Literally questioning. haha.
But i have to say, Erika, that this was really good. Keep writing and don't ever stop! Rock on!
Kisses and Bites,
Raina -
Awesome
Wow, well written! I have to agree though, love is...not good. Seems as though you've really gotten hurt by it but stay strong and you'll get through it.
My fav lines have to be:
'it starts out sweet like a rose petal kiss
but as time moves on you lose that bliss'
This is so true, and if it's not, are the ones who have discovered this phrase to be true just unfortunate?
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