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[brilliance+finality ]

play dead
stay dead
babe the guilt you've been fed,
becoming the monsters
under your own bed.
mommy won't help
she's sick in the head,
so run from the room
get caught up in the dread.
x
in amazing detail
the glitter and doom
the moonlight left frail,
silhouetting the gloom,
x
the cryptic telepathy
evidence in your wake
disaster sings the sympathy
delusions forsake.
x
soft darkness is fading
the morning looks bleak
so call on your nightmares
lay thee down to sleep




Author notes

lol, so acctualy, i've got this friend, right, and he's pissing me off cause he isn't at the library, so i have no one to talk to while i do my report, and what started out a comment on his myspace turned into freestyle, so here it is for ya'll to enjoy!

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  • Love Me For Me
    January 24, 2007
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    RAY RAY. It's neat. =)



    YOU NEVER CALLED. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


    • ruiven
      February 3, 2007
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      you call me just not now cuz i'm grounded.
      ~raven


  • Wicked Angel
    January 21, 2007

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    haha good poem raven and dont be calling blake a whore, hes a ManWhore, theres a difference I swear.....


  • Undead666
    January 20, 2007
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    Awesome poem.Not too long and dragged out,it flows together and it's dark


    • ruiven
      January 20, 2007
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      thank you,

      now put it on your myspace whore. (sorry, i just like calling people whore.)

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