Sitting alone
listening to pitch and tone
of strangers screaming in my ears.
Locked in her room
waiting for doom
as bass pulses away the years.
The volume too high
so now she denies
the existence of her own breaking heart.
As guitars wail
in her own little jail
hearing loss is just the start.
Temptation surrounds her
when her eyes are in a blur
to break out her windows in rage.
No one sees or understands
this is no fairyland
its like Cinderella with black lipstick on the page.
She cannot fly
this girl just cries
as she blows her eardrums away.
tell me what ya thnk!
Comments
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wow awesome
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AWESOME!
wow...ive done this so many times i know the feeling very well. I like the line "its like Cinderella with black lipstick on the page" its very different. I love the wording. Your an awesome writer!
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great poem, i loved it!
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Breath Taking
DAMN GIRL!!!!! You jus keep gettin better n better each time u write something.. i love it.. i could actually picture all of this and everything and felt all the emotion.. absolutly breath taking. Great job babe, love ya lot's. keep it up!!
Love Always
Don't Let Me Bleed
-AKA-
Licia!!
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