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Charlie

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Charlie

 

Once long ago in a fable they say

The Elves watched the children both night and day

In A land called England that’s magical

And wee ones were very atypical

 

The wood elves were very strong

Dancing and playing with song

We need a child to be in our charge

Just a wee baby, not very large

 

So with a prayer… and a bit of magic dust

The heavens parted, a tremendous thrust

The woodlands shook and when the dust cleared

Just like a miracle, Charlie appeared

 

All the Elves cheered and shouted his name

Charlie the Prince, his throne be acclaimed

So now in the woods and all through the land

Charlie will rule with a gentle hand.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 9

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    Wow this is a wonderful write its wonderfully written you did a wonderful job. It was a pleasure to read.

  • sunsunny3235
    March 15
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    I love it! I'm one of your Sestina students and it is wonderful!


  • melphleg gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    aww

    Very cute. I love how you incorporate the innocents of a child with a fantasy poem. I do something similar in one of my pieces. This was a delight. It really warms the heart to read.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    June 19, 2008

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    I love to write children's stories and poems it started with my kids this is ca wonderful tail although I was Born in England I guess there are places in every county that is Magical...


    • Amera gold member
      June 20, 2008
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      I thought your accent was English when I heard your video. Your page said Australia so I was confused. At any rate I am in love with your voice, it enchants me.


  • Manoura xx
    January 24, 2007
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    if i take all of the verdicts of the people this is what it looks lyk:

    Well DoneWonderful!Enchanting...BRAVO!!!!!!!!

    That is all exactly what i am thinking... but i am thinking even more words... but words are just not good enough to fit this poem...so i have to say this:


  • Im3
    January 20, 2007

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    Well Done

    Very Well written, adn the story line, I loved it. You desire to look into the world of elves is evident. The security in this world you see, is made clear, byt the tine and effort you give to explain your passion. Nicely Done!


  • Madcap
    January 20, 2007

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    This is a very cute little poem, very befitting of it's muse. It has good flow and is just as whimsical as you could ever want it to be. Very well done!


  • January 20, 2007
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    Wonderful!

    Full of tenderness and love. I very strong yet gentle aabb...


  • PerVirtuous
    January 20, 2007

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    Enchanting...

    This is beautiful, magical, and full of love. I give this three bunnies, and would give more if they would let me.


  • Fire N Ice
    January 20, 2007

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    BRAVO!!!!!!!!

    WOW!
    im lost for words!
    this is just adorable, and his mommy and daddy will be thrilled!
    My nephew, the elf prince hehehe
    Thankyou Amera, what a special gift!

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