Open
with your soft kiss
orange scented letters,
they're for you, filled with fresh freesias'
petals.
Author notes
This is my first cinquain.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Simple Things... by Ephiphany.
1000 points, ended May 25, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful. Touches the senses, speaks to the heart. Nicely penned.
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imagination, beauty, love, desires spoken and unspoken, a fragrances full cinquain (your first you say?) which does singing honour to whoever it is written for
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Sweet Sonja. Enjoyed your words.
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Wonderful to see a first time cinquain writer here - good for you!! This is a lovely poem - reminds of the time when we still sent letters to each other sealed with a kiss (swak). Of course this letter can also be the loved ones mouth... Just make sure of your syllable count in Line 4 - I count 7 instead of 8 (I will check that on the syllable counter as well). I think "freesia" is 2 syllables. Thank you for this entry and good luck in the contest. Hope you'll write many more cinquains.
~ Nicolette
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SO SOFT AND BEAUTIFUL!
When is comes to orange colored flowers I always had soft part in my heart. I feel that orange is such a soft lovely color.
Your words are so soft and caring. 
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