As I sit here gazing into space
And wondering what to do
I decided I’d take the time
To send a poem to you
So I sit with my pen
And let the words soft flow
These words that I am writing
Come straight from my heart
I love you because you are just you
My tender thoughts are all of you
My heart beats because of you
Passion flows my body
Through burning hot because of you
Right now, all I want to do
Is just love because of you
And does not change from day to day
Because my words will follow you
I love you
I love you
I love you
Author notes
I was missing my lover and this came out. I'm not an expert poet...just a woman in love
A contest entry
- Take Your Pic by piccola.
600 points, ended February 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can feel the love through your writing, thank you for the entry.
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very well wrote it reminds me of me loved it
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REAL FEELINGS
Grace, this poem, as well as others you've written, exude heart felt real feelings. I commend you in your ability to put your real feelings on paper and share them with us. I love you because you are just you.
Jeff -
This is a very sweet and beautiful poem... When your special someone is away it is then you find out just how special they really are and how dear they are to yor heart. When they return, I am sure the passion expodes like firworks and the earth moves beneath your feel... and everything is perfect when your together. I really did love your poem and how it just flowed from line to line...
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I think this is cute...full of meaning.I think this is of course just as good maybe better than your other poems I have read...keep up the great work...!!!!!
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Great Job
I feel the love that you have here and as always it is talking to me internally. You don't have to be a great poet to right from your heart. What you have here is real and that means more to me than a dictionary poem that a lot of people write. Great job.
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