Gravid
Seed
Grows in me
Lies in wait for life
A warm place to maturate
Love
Baby
Adoring me from within
Two hearts beat in me
Brings us joy
Love
Author notes
Mirror Oddquain
The mirror oddquain has a syllable count of 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 1, 7, 5, 3, 1,
In a list
A contest entry
- Baby I Need Thee!!! by Rebekah-Ann.
525 points, ended December 6, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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O Thank you so much for entering another one of my competitions!! I simply love this poem!
Two hearts beating in me!
Child adoring me from within!
Simply great!!!
Becks
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Yes I love this a lot. Well done here to
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Very beautiful.....I love the picture that just ties in the words. Well done.
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Wow, great job. So sweet and tender. "Two hearts beat in me." Great line.
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wow, thank you
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wow
thank you so much for your entry. -
does a mirror oddquian have to have the same word for the last line on both parts???or did you just do that for your poem???
GREAT JOB!!!AGAIN!!!!!!AND AGAIN!!!!!AND ONCE MORE>>>AGAIN!!!!haha..BYE!!!!! -
What if it's twins? Does that throw off the syllable count? I'll give you two bunnies until the sonogram comes back, then I'll give you another bunny then if it's just one fetus.
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well...this is very interesting...nice job at making it happen...best, radical
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Sweet!
Princess! This is so nice!
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