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Burn

Incinerated

Cremated...alive

...x...

Scorched

Blistering

No chance that you'll survive.

...x...

Hell

Forthcoming

Let thy Demons rise!

...x...

Abyss

Perpetual

Burning in my eyes.
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Author notes

I'm on Fire...

Burn Muthafucker Burn!

A contest entry

Please give me your opinion on my poem...and please no "you need to be saved by Jesus" shit, no offense, I have my own religion...and no, I'm not Satanic

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Comments


  • A.N. Divine
    January 23, 2007

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    I like your author notes, they gave me a chuckle.
    "THE POWER OF some guy in a toga COMPELLS YOU!"

    I like the anger, brutal write.


    -C.


  • Xxxxxxxxx
    January 20, 2007
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    sounds like a nice vaction spot, i'll be sure to come visit, i promise.