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Monkey Business (A Rictameter)

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monkey
swings through the trees,
cheeky and looking for
mischief. He likes his bananas,
eating them for breakfast, lunch and tea too!
With all this energy he jumps
from tree to tree playing.
He loves his life
monkey


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Inspired by 'cheeky lil monkey'

A contest entry

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  • deadcolor dreams
    February 18, 2007
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    Made me smile. This is pretty good, and technically perfect.


  • LittleAnn
    January 21, 2007

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    This is a cute write, really enjoyed reading it... I wish you lots of luck in the contest,
    keep up the excellent work!
    Annie


  • azure85 gold member
    January 20, 2007

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    Oh, this is darling! What a cute rictameter! And what a cool inspiration! Watch out for those banana peels! This is great!


  • Dusty Rose
    January 20, 2007

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    Nice write..seems I know the monkey you speak of here..LOL..Good job on this piece..very cute..

    Dusty


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 20, 2007
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    awwwwwwwww mum i love this ... i nebba inpsired a poem b4 well not that i now of lol i love every word of it ..it great poem for children awell ..good luck it contest...smiles ~cheeky~ xXx o0o xXx

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