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Shayris...

Kahin Jo Aapne Humse Hamari Hi Daastan...
To Sunne mein thodi achchi lagi..
Tanhai Hi Hoti Hai is dard ki dava...
Yeh baat hamein ab sachchi lagi.

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Kya Kare Hum Jo Chand Mein Ho Daag
Gam Nahin Hamein..Jo Koi Ho Tumhare Saath.
Nazre to hum par hi tiki rehti hain tumhari...
Bhale kisi aur ke haath..mein ho tumhara haath.

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Deedar ho jab tumhara...toh waqt khushnasib hot hai
Kuch pal ke liye jaise khuda hamare karib hota hai
Lekin yeh lamhe to hote hain gumshuda...
Pehli baar humne jaana..Ki Waqt bhi garib hota hai.

Author notes

Aadab...Is Nachiz ki taraf se kuch sher aapke liye pesh hain..

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    November 14
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    mere lye

    Wording = 7 out of 10

    Theme = 7 out of 10

    Idea = 7 out of 10

    Title = 6 out of 10

    Style of Poetry = 7 out of 10

    Language = 17 out of 25

    Mental Depth of the Work = 16 out of 25

    Total are 67 out of 100

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  • chinmay
    November 13
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    Bahoot khoob, Parth. Aapki shayari mein junoon hai.


  • appleey
    October 22
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    subanallah!!


  • Princess-nee
    January 23, 2007

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    Hi Parth.
    Wow a shayri..spilled with so much emotions...This is well done.I could understand it though not much fluent in Hindhi. Very nice expressions.deep and intense..

    "Zindagi bhi ajeeb hota hai
    Jise hum poori dilse chaahta
    Woh kabhi milthi nehi"

    lol thats what I had in mind after reading this poem.If any errors in hindhi forgive me..

    hope to trip over and read some of your works laters


    • Parth Sawhney
      January 25, 2007
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      hey shama...
      thanks 4 dat lovely comment..and dont worry..ur hindi is good..
      tc..

      pArTh.


  • Anshu
    January 21, 2007

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    XceeeeeeeeeeLent

    Adab arze Ghalib sahab.........!!!!!!!
    Kya baat hai.....seriously.....now i feel like you are no more my LITTLE Bro..Ab janab pyar mohabbat ki baatein karna seekh gaye hain...aur kyun na seekhen......ye kala to humare khun main basi hai....lol
    Anyhow..surely dear its the most wonderful shayari i have ever read...Its not kjust a matter of saying as you would think, but i mean by my words
    You simply rock bro....Kabhi mil ke mefil jamayenge ustaad....!!!!!!
    anyhow...take care bro
    tiu tiu

    • Parth Sawhney
      January 22, 2007
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      haha...these are very close to my heart..and first time i've attempted to write them...
      glad that u like em..
      chalo..mehfil mein milte hain..ab tanhai se tanha hona chahte hain..
      tc..

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