i dreamt one night
that i awoke in my bed
and looked up into your eyes.
and you kissed me on the forehead
and said
"i love you."
i don't remember my response,
i only remember laying my head down onto your chest
and going back to sleep.
when i really woke up
there you were
sleeping peacefully
with me in your arms
and thuogh you never really told me
i've known since that night
that the best place for me to sleep
is in your arms
Please tell me what you think, its been a while since I've written...
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I really like this poem. I just like the whole thing, not certain parts, I am usually very picky... odd. Anyways, I'm not very glad to say it for me, but I've had dreams like that... I'm sure your glad to know you're not the only one who feels that way though... Title totally fits the poem.
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Alsome
dreamt one night
that i awoke in my bed
and looked up into your eyes.
and you kissed me on the forehead
and said
"i love you."
Alsome and well expressed throughout this poem that u have expressed with full of heartfelt emotions with marvelous soul put into this poem. U did amazin job. ure talent is great keep up the marvelous work
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me likes
awwwww that's cute, it like it. well written i can tell you care for this person. keep on writing!!
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Nice Write!!
I really enjoyed this write I myself just did this with my girlfriend not to long ago and in addition I wrote a piece just like this with the same title and subject.
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this is a great write keep it up!
awe that is so sweet, and its weird because that just happened to me and my boyfriend like two weeks ago. except it was me that told him i love him and i he had the same reaction so i know exactly what you are talking about in this poem! i love this great write
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