I've wanted to tell you
So many times
The words always catch in my throat
I've wanted to sketch you
And breathe the same air
I've wanted to dance in your rote
But my words would be poison
They'd only cause pain
My pen couldn't capture your grace
With you in the room my lungs wouldn't work
Your footsteps... I never could trace
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This is really quite succinct and perfect in mood. . .Job well done hun!
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beautiful! i LOVE IT!!! i totally know how u feel dude.... and thankz for commenting on my poem! i love lines 5-7....great wording. but the background is really creepy...u might want to change it.
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This is very beautiful. wonderful word flow.
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