I'd build an empire from your fallen tears
if only you would look at me
I'd resurrect my hopes and dreams
if only you would see
I'd live a life of fantasy
if only you would know
if only you could see, dear boy, just what you do to me
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about a guy i have a crush on
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A really good piece of writing
This is what love is. It can certainly spin your head around and mess you up. This say's everything about love with a short piece. You have captured the feelings well with this piece.
The sheer frustration of him not noticing you is all through this piece. Well done, keep writing.
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ah love eh, it spins us all and we can only go dizzy in the movement. a good poem. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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