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In my way

I could
have been a
tumbleweed,rolling
across the prairie night and
day. I could have saved my
heart from pain,but love
got in my
way.

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  • Sister Nation
    December 15, 2007

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    what a great verse! this says so much with just a few words. you are talented. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always


  • Huntress silver member
    October 16, 2007

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    I like this one, darn old love always has a way of getting in the way sometimes


  • celestial
    June 14, 2007
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    What beautiful verses.

  • Warrior7
    January 29, 2007
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    I have to agree with the other two about this being put to music because it does have that lyrical tune going on. Your dead right when you say that hearts heal but memories linger on, sometimes i wish the memories would disappear though.
    I enjoyed the read


  • hoodoolover silver member
    January 24, 2007

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    I have to agree, this reads like lyrics and would be good to put to music, it's got that sad hook to it. Thanks for entering the contest


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    January 20, 2007

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    Wow!

    Let me be the first to congratulate you on a really fine poem. These words should actually be put to a tune, I think. It is a fine idea and a beautiful story. Accolades top to bottom!

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