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Author notes
Always loved the snow - at least some of the time.
In a list
A contest entry
- ~It is Snowing~ by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended January 24, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You've Been Hood-WINKED!
Impressive rhythm! Being a meter and rhyme fanatic, this was a pleasure!
My only real complaint is that it was slightly hard to read on that speckled background.
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It is here
Our snow has just come down hard this month and Its crazy. I love taking the kids out and playing. I enjoy it for the most part. I hate when it gets to cold for us to go out, and then its no fun! I love the imagery, you have describe it in a way I never heard of before. Very creative and it was nicely written. Congrats!
amanda
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This was a wonderful poem,
And I thank you for sharing it
Congratulations on your award
warm thoughts
Frozentearz -
It is for reason like this that you have a place on my favourites list Such a wonderful poem and worthy of its Gold award, who could complain about finishing behind such a work Well do My Congratulations
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wonderful!
this is beautiful...the whole thing..the imagry the way you have persented it...truly beautiful!
wonderfully done!
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wow. Now YOU'RE A POET. This is beautiful and I'm going to book mark it..seems everything's perfect. I could learn from you...
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wow. THis is amazing. I want to see snow! You did a beautiful job witht his poems and I noticed that the second and fourth line of every stanza was 6 syllables. And you're right, when you do it that way, it makes it flow so much better! yay! I learned somthing useful!!!! Beautiful poem Grandpa! I love it!
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What a beautiful write Paul.. I could hear the crunch and whisper of the snow..
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This is beautiful. You described snow and winter in a way that sounds warm and inviting, which often is not the case because although it may be beautiful - it does not feel beautiful.
I live in GA so we don't get snow often. Usually just a sprinkle of ice sometimes. But the whole 'idea' of snow is lovely and one I like to indulge upon from time to time.
The reality of it, of slick roads and power outtages is not one that sounds so inviting.
But anyway, you brought the beauty of the coldness to life here.
My only complaint was that the font was small and hard to see - I have poor vision btw.
Lovely work!
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Absolutely beautiful! This is so wonderful. Your poem stands alone and paints its own picture. Fantastic writing. Good luck in our contest. Jeannie and James
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Splendor to Read.
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Cula bula rula! Hi. ^_^
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Umm... you didn't like this? I think we're seeing two different pieces then. Perhaps you need to make an appointment for a stronger pair of glasses? 
I agree with Reni, "It's nothing short of amazing, as usual."
Hmm... yep, that basically describes it. Love the background, picture and your table... very lovely.
Paul = Pure talent
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So this is the poem you said you didn't like all that much.
It's beautiful: the imagery raw, original and vivid; the flow is flawless, as usual; ( the table looks great, too!)
I enjoyed swaying to the soft, smooth flow of this poem, Paul. It's nothing short of amazing, as usual.
-Reni
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This is a good description of a snowing day and the background and picture complement your poem. This feels rather joyous to me and that's a good thing. Good luck in the contest.
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